Over the last few days I have been experimenting with Haiku. I'm not sure if the experiment is working well or not. In other words, I'm not quite sure if I am grasping the straws correctly. Here are a couple of the Haiku I have scribbled:
Day the first:
Sleek, black, prowling cat;
Graymalkin - do you come?
Magical Moll-cat.
Day the second:
LCD screen.
Giggles and shrieks of delight;
computer literate.
Day the third:
1.
Glistening white weight;
curvature of lifeless bough
magical winter.
2.
The angry sun
gold and red in cloudless skies.
Beauty - a statement.
I think I like the last two. Oh, but would number 1 work better as:
Magical winter;
dormant boughs bow beneath
glistening white snow.
Oh, maybe that one! Yeah, I think that one sounds much better. Wow, blogging helps me edit. Didn't think that'd happen!
